Donnerstag, 29. Mai 2014

"ON THE PULSE OF MORNING" by Maya Angelou. Poem Analysis by Genia Lackey

A Rock, A River, A Tree 

Hosts to species long since departed, 
Marked the mastodon, 
The dinosaur, who left dried tokens 
Of their sojourn here 
On our planet floor, 
Any broad alarm of their hastening doom 
Is lost in the gloom of dust and ages.
But today, the Rock cries out to us, clearly, forcefully, 
Come, you may stand upon my 
Back and face your distant destiny, 
But seek no haven in my shadow. 
I will give you no hiding place down here.
You, created only a little lower than 
The angels, have crouched too long in 
The bruising darkness 
Have lain too long 
Face down in ignorance. 
Your mouths spilling words
Armed for slaughter. 
The Rock cries out to us today, you may stand upon me, 
But do not hide your face.
Across the wall of the world, 
A River sings a beautiful song. It says, 
Come, rest here by my side.
Each of you, a bordered country, 
Delicate and strangely made proud, 
Yet thrusting perpetually under siege. 
Your armed struggles for profit 
Have left collars of waste upon 
My shore, currents of debris upon my breast. 
Yet today I call you to my riverside, 
If you will study war no more. Come, 
Clad in peace, and I will sing the songs 
The Creator gave to me when I and the 
Tree and the rock were one. 
Before cynicism was a bloody sear across your 
Brow and when you yet knew you still 
Knew nothing. 
The River sang and sings on.
There is a true yearning to respond to 
The singing River and the wise Rock. 
So say the Asian, the Hispanic, the Jew 
The African, the Native American, the Sioux, 
The Catholic, the Muslim, the French, the Greek 
The Irish, the Rabbi, the Priest, the Sheik, 
The Gay, the Straight, the Preacher, 
The privileged, the homeless, the Teacher. 
They hear. They all hear 
The speaking of the Tree.
They hear the first and last of every Tree 
Speak to humankind today. Come to me, here beside the River. 
Plant yourself beside the River.
Each of you, descendant of some passed 
On traveller, has been paid for. 
You, who gave me my first name, you, 
Pawnee, Apache, Seneca, you 
Cherokee Nation, who rested with me, then 
Forced on bloody feet, 
Left me to the employment of 
Other seekers -- desperate for gain, 
Starving for gold. 
You, the Turk, the Arab, the Swede, the German, the Eskimo, the Scot, 
You the Ashanti, the Yoruba, the Kru, bought, 
Sold, stolen, arriving on the nightmare 
Praying for a dream. 
Here, root yourselves beside me. 
I am that Tree planted by the River, 
Which will not be moved. 
I, the Rock, I the River, I the Tree 
I am yours -- your passages have been paid. 
Lift up your faces, you have a piercing need 
For this bright morning dawning for you. 
History, despite its wrenching pain 
Cannot be unlived, but if faced 
With courage, need not be lived again.
Lift up your eyes upon 
This day breaking for you. 
Give birth again 
To the dream.
Women, children, men, 
Take it into the palms of your hands, 
Mold it into the shape of your most 
Private need. Sculpt it into 
The image of your most public self. 
Lift up your hearts 
Each new hour holds new chances 
For a new beginning. 
Do not be wedded forever 
To fear, yoked eternally 
To brutishness.
The horizon leans forward, 
Offering you space to place new steps of change. 
Here, on the pulse of this fine day 
You may have the courage 
To look up and out and upon me, the 
Rock, the River, the Tree, your country. 
No less to Midas than the mendicant. 
No less to you now than the mastodon then.
Here, on the pulse of this new day 
You may have the grace to look up and out 
And into your sister's eyes, and into 
Your brother's face, your country 
And say simply 
Very simply 
With hope -- 
Good morning[1]
Maya Angelou is perhaps one of the most extraordinary personalities of the twentieth century. A dancer, an actress, an author, a screenwriter, a poet, she has multitudinously earned the title of “the fist black woman”. Just to name a few, she was the first African-American woman to have a non-fiction best-seller with her autobiographic novel I know why the Caged Bird Sings which came out in 1969. In 1972 she became the first black woman to have her screenplay produced, when her drama Georgia was made into a movie. However, the first “first” goes back to the WWII years, when she was the first black female cable car conductor. Her latest “first” and conceivably her most commendable one, yet, was the recitation of her poem “On the Pulse of Morning” at President Bill Clinton’s inauguration in 1993. The audio version of this extraordinary, highly inspirational and utterly eloquent poem/speech won (very much justified[2]) Grammy Award for the best spoken word album.
The pulse of the poem is set in the very first line of the first strophe: A Rock, A River, A Tree, by the iambic trimester—the closest to the rhythm of the heart. Everything even the indefinite articles are capitalized to emphasize their importance and the personification of the subsequent line: hosts to species long since departed. Such anthropomorphism is carried on, when the Rock cries out, the Rivers sings and the Tree speaks. The first two lines of the poem concurrently epitomize the rhetorical device of apposition—the second element serves as an explanation of the first.[3]  The whole first strophe can be interpreted as ethos, an attempt to establish credibility as if uttering: “Look, we have been here since before dinosaurs and mastodons, listen, to what we have to say to you!”
The appeal to ethics is followed by pathos in the second stanza as the Rock cries out to us, clearly, forcefully … reiterating two verses down in anaphora: the Rock cries out to us today as the Rock urges the humans to rise to their intended position—only a little lower than the angels, and stop hiding and crouching face down in ignorance. The Rock is willing to serve the Human as a pedestal—you may stand upon my back… you may stand upon me (anaphora)—as the Creator intended for the human to be the crown of his creation. The song of the River appeals to logic; the attempts of profit maximization of the businesses has led to exploitation and pollution, it is time to try something new, not war, but peace, not against nature, but with it. The Tree, on the other hand, uses more pathos: bought, sold, stolen, arriving on the nightmare praying for a dream. It invites the listener to come to the riverside: plant yourself beside the River…root yourselves beside me. In this case the author employs the technique of chremamorphism-- giving characteristics of an object to a person[4].  Through the personification of natural objects and bestowing humans with qualities of a plant the author accentuates the inseparability of mankind, nature and their creator.
However, mankind still needs to give birth…to the dream of unity. So far humans have built the wall of the world and have bordered [their] countries, they have led armed struggles for profit…--desperate for gain, starving for gold, bought, sold, stolen, arriving on the nightmare praying for a dream. It seems noteworthy that the author never uses collective terms like humans, people or mankind. Maya Angelou either uses the direct “you” or very specific categorisations of the seventh stanza (the Asian, the Hispanic, the Jew et.c, by the way this is the only stanza which is written in rhymes: Jew—Sioux, Greek—Sheik, Preacher--Teacher) or the metaphor each of you, descendant of some passed on traveller. This line evokes an image of a prodigious son, whose Father is patiently waiting for him to come back and plant and root himself back at home.  Home in this particular case is the Rock, the River, the Tree. Notice, the Rock is not defined by its color, the River is given no name and the Tree is not classified either. The ancient Chinese teaching of Feng Shui states that the energy chi which lives in all things manifests itself in five different expressions which are also called the Feng Shui elements. These are Water, Wood, Fire, Earth and Metal.[5] It seems as though Maya Angelou intentionally leaves out the elements of Fire and Metal out of her poem. These two elements have been abused by mankind for the purpose of destruction. It is time to restore the balance. It is time to come home.
One could argue that it was the original task of a human—Adam’s job—to give names to all things. To give names and define their purpose, yes. But the humans got too caught up in name-calling and forgot their perhaps most important purpose—the “molding of the dream”. The beginning of any creation is logos—word, image, or a dream. Full of pathos Maya Angelo urges the listener to give birth again to the dream. Using the device of a metaphor she persuades women, children, men, [to] take it into the palms of your hands, mod it into the shape of your most private need, Sculpt it into the image of your most public self. This is a deeply philosophical paragraph. The author is using very powerful images/metaphors to stress the importance of what is being said, for example, “to give birth to the dream”. As already mentioned, a dream or an idea is the very beginning of creation, be it a creation of a work of art or conceptualisation of ones own destiny, the image precedes its materialization. The birth is on one hand the very beginning of something and on the other hand it is the ultimate act of creation in terms of materialization. From this perspective the phrase “give birth to the dream” could be considered a pleonasm as if saying “let us go to the beginning of the origin”[6]. In this particular case such pleonasm does not sound redundant, but rather provides the necessary graveness to the point. And then of course there are “your most private need” and “your most public self” which are indispensable to the poem. The “public self” is relatively easy: it is the best version of ourselves, our super-ego if you will. But what is the most private need? It can only be speculated that the need that Maya Angelou is talking about is the need for freedom, not in terms of human rights or civil freedoms, but the essential need to be free from expectations and prejudices, free from burdens of the past and free from fear. In fact the word courage is used twice in the poem, History, despite its wrenching pain Cannot be unlived, but if faced With courage, need not be lived again. This is what Maya Angelou said about the virtue of courage: "Courage is the most important of all virtues, because without courage, you cannot practice any of the other virtues consistently."[7]

The last four stanzas contain a lot of non consecutive anaphors, such as Lift up you eyes,… lift up your hearts; You may have the courage,… you may have the grace. No less to Midas than the mendicant, no less to you now than the mastodon then. To look up and out and upon me, the Rock, the River the Tree, your country… to look up and out and into your sister’s eyes, and into your brother’s face, your country. The latter constitutes the climax, the high point of the poem, because now the listener, who was still all the way down on the ground in the beginning of the poem, has now risen to the proper for a human heights (only a little lower than the angels) and can look upon the country which is made up of the Rock, the River and the Tree (the natural endowment) as well as the brothers and sisters (the people that populate the country) with a sense of freedom and  equality and face the new morning, a new beginning with hope and optimism.  When Maya Angelo finished, her dream was born in the hearts of all who listened.






[1] http://www.ssc.wisc.edu/~oliver/soc220/Lectures220/Angelou.htm
[2] Watch youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=59xGmHzxtZ4
[3] See handout “MLK’s Rhetorical Devices Worksheet”
[4] http://writingsota.blogspot.co.at/2011/09/objectifying-chremamorphism.html
[5] http://feng-shui.lovetoknow.com/Feng_Shui_Elements
[6] Pleonasmus, m. (grch. überflüssig vorhanden sein): Die Verwendung des Bezugsworts mit einem für es ohnehin charakteristischen Merkmal (im Unterschied zur Tautologie unterschiedlicher Wortart) http://faql.de/stilfiguren.html
[7] http://www.biography.com/people/maya-angelou-9185388

Ort der Begegnung

Als ich mir das pädagogische Konzept von WINGS überlege, fällt es mir leichter aufzulisten, was diese Schule NICHT ist:
  • Es ist keine Montessori Schule, obwohl Kinder mit Montessori Materialien arbeiten werden und im eigenständigen und eigenverantwortlichen Lernen geübt werden.
  • Es ist keine Waldorfschule, auch wenn Epochenunterricht (Themenblöcke) zum Grundstein der Jahresplanung wird. Anthroposophie von Rudolf Steiner  widerspiegelt viele meiner Prinzipien der ganzheitlichen Weltanschauung.
  • Es ist keine „Wild“ Schule (Pesta von Rebeca und Mauricio Wild), dennoch wird WINGS dem selbst-bestimmten Lernen viel Freiraum lassen.
  • Es ist keine Freinet Schule, jedoch wird die Anfertigung der Unterrichtsmaterialien von Schülern ein unentbehrlicher Teil des Lernprozesses wird.
  • Es ist keine Begabtenschule, doch wird Begabungs- und Kreativitäts- (im umfassenden Sinne des Wortes) - Förderung im Vordergrund der didaktischen Grundsetzen stehen
  • Es ist auch keine Regelschule, obwohl sie sich nach dem Lehrplan orientiert.


Was eine Schule ausmacht ist eigentlich die Summe aller Beteiligten. Ich kann der Schule eine Richtung vorgeben. Die Schüler/innen, Lehrer/innen und Eltern werden sie mitsteuern. Ich freue mich auf jeden Fall auf die Reise. Auf das, wie die Schule tatsächlich wird, bin ich sehr neugierig. Eines kann ich aber jetzt schon versichern: WINGS wird ein Ort der Begegnung sein; Begegnung mit Materialien, Begegnung mit der Natur aber, vor allem, Begegnung mit Menschen!

Samstag, 24. Mai 2014

WINGS--Waldviertler INtegrative und Ganzheitliche Schule
(Woodquaters Integrative and Holistic School)

This blog is dedicated to my latest infant—the one I have been pregnant with for the past twelve years (ever since my oldest son started school)—my vision of school.

These pages will lay bare the circumstance of the conception of my ideas.
These pages will convey the pains and contractions of a school founding.
These pages will disclose the unraveling of the umbilical red tape.
These pages will enunciate groans of frustration and utter cries of joys of success.
There might be some sighing and panting or huffing and puffing.


I deeply hope that this blog will guide us through the experience of an inimitable birth of a unique body of persons and its journey as it surmounts the horizons carrying everyone envolved on its WINGS


Liebe Leserin,
Lieber Leser,

Mit der Idee eine Schule zu gründen bin ich seit ca. 12 Jahren schwanger. Damals fing mein älteste Sohn die Schule an. Nun setzen die ersten Wehen ein:

Der erste Infoabend am 23. Juni um 19 Uhr 
im Community-Raum lichtspiel Allentsteig, 
Dr.-Ernst-Krennstr. 20. 
3804 Allentsteig

Hier stelle ich euch meine Vision einer Schule vor, in der den Kindern Flügel wachsen...